Q- Write a short story in about 150 to 200 words on the following topic.

 

Three of my friends and my self where up in a hot air balloon . When all of a sudden it developed a tear. It started descending at a good speed. We looked around for a parachute and discovered there were only two and we were four of us....

 

Please give some points or suggestions to help me write the short story.

Try to answer As Soon As Possible.

 

Thanks in Advance!

Arul Vaid

Such questions are meant to test your writing skills and should be attempted on your own. However, these points might help you elaborate:

- As there were only two parachutes, bailing out of the balloon was not an option: none of the friends was willing to leave the others behind!
- We had to think fast as the balloon started losing altitude.
- Suddenly, I had an idea: we would use a piece of the parachute to patch up the tear.
- Promptly, one of us cut out a square piece from the strong parachute material, another removed hair pins to sew the piece on to the balloon while two of us tried to maintain the balance!
- Fortunately, the tear was repaired and the balloon soared again.
- At the first given opportunity, we made the balloon land in an open field, knowing full well that the repair may not last for a long time....

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Three of my friends and my self were up in a hot balloon . when all of a sudden it developed tear  . it started descending at a good speed . we looked around for a parachute and discovered there were only two parachutes and we were four of us to be saved. so one of our friend became guilty and said that he would go with one parachute and would leave us for dying. we made him understood that we are friends and we should help each other and be faithful to each other and also said that a friend in need is a friend in deed so he understood his fault and we all started to find the solution to the problem. then after some time of struggles an idea struck into my mind that we can share two parachutes as two friends can use one parachute and the other two can use the other parachute . but it was difficult but we also did not wanted to die and wanted to live life and survive so i told everyone my idea and everyone supported it . so i and my friend climbed first and opened the parachute while  coming towards the ground and then our other friends came and we all were saved. this experience was the most thrillest experience of my life.




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