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The traffic police department is observing a road safety week it has asked each school to send 40 students to participate in road safety week on 10th November 2012 . The principal of New Era School, Noida has asked the head boy of the school Sameer Kapoor to put up a notice asking each house captain to send 10 names .Write a notice in not more than 50 words on behalf of the head boy.
This the notice...... Please check it experts...
Solution:
Overall the notice is fine.
However, you can work upon the language and make some modifications.
Few suggestions:
Instead of 'school principle', you could have written 'respected principal'.
Also, the word principal is not spelt correctly.
'House' need not start with a capital H.