I wrote a diary entry on topic that imagine yourself as an employee of east india company who has came - Social Science - From Trade to Territory

Question

I wrote a diary entry on topic that imagine yourself as an employee
of east india company who has came to india to seek permission to
trade with india So pls suggest if there are some errors

Charu Kalra · Accepted Answer

Dear Student,

a Points mentioned in your diary are fine, you may elaborate more
on products that East India company wished to trade and how there
is huge demand for these products in Europe
b Further, EIC was granted right to trade by the Mughal emperors,
so the language used in your diary needs modification
c There are also grammatical errors which needs to be rectified
d Also mention how right to trade to EIC became an exclusive
privilege for the Company
e You may also refer as to why you want cotton and what system you
propose to introduce to enhance production like the system of
advances to the weavers

Regards

I wrote a diary entry on topic that imagine yourself as an employee of east india company who has came to india to seek permission to trade with india . So pls suggest if there are some errors