EDITING
More of the fun and excitement in your life come More Much
from use your senses. Sences open up a
world who is full of sights, sounds, smells,
tastes and things to touch. The sharp your senses and
the more you use it, more enjoyable each
of this worlds becomes for you.
For instant, a painter can see shades
and shapes which little gifted
people could not see.
| Error | Correction |
More of the fun and excitement in your life comes | a) More | a) Much |
from use your senses. Senses open up a | b) use | b) using |
world who is full of sights, sounds, smells | c) who | c) which |
tastes and things to touch. The sharp your senses and | d) sharp | d) sharper |
the more you use it, the more enjoyable each | e) it | e) them |
of these become for you. | f) become | f) becomes |
For instant, a painter can see shades | g) instant | g) instance |
and shapes which little gifted | h) little | h) many |
people could not see. |
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Hope this helps!